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16 September 2009 @ 12:35 pm
Hey, this entry is for constructive criticism. I can't get enough of it, and way I figure things I probably need it. XD

Comments screened, of course.
Mood: curiouscurious
Edward Elric ::The Fullmetal Alchemist::: Genius at Workelricfullmetal on September 16th, 2008 10:03 pm (UTC)
Ah, okay then. Well, for one, Roy does seem more inclined to hang out in the background, rather than asserting himself into the situation like he normally would.

Two, I think he'd be more willing to pull someone he knew on a personal level, (let's say Ed, because, well they're both in the same vicinity for the log they're in right now) aside in order to get more information. Or he'd at least try to get answers from everyone else personally, rather than depending on a device he's never heard of or seen before in his life. (If, that makes sense. ^^;)

I think that's it so far. :3
Roy Mustang: *thinking* / *worried*ishbalwarhero on September 16th, 2008 10:06 pm (UTC)
To be honest, I just didn't know how to do that. I tried, but nobody really noticed, so...XD

I've been neglecting in_fabula lately as well, which is part of it. >>